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What hurts me the most,
Is the fact that I care.
I care so much,
My heart breaks.

The pain in my chest will never go away,
Never, until my dying day.
My dearest love, how could you go?
Leaving me here to die alone.

I loved you so,
Yet it wasn't enough.
If you told me so,
I could change.

I lived off of lies,
The lies that I once believed.
I guess that it is no use anymore,
I have figured out my mistakes.

Dearest friend,
Who was once my true love,
I shall never forgive you,
Not after what you have done.

Yet life must go on,
With you here or not.
I won't let it kill me,
I know what it's worth.

The lies you fed me,
Day after day.
Yet you still say,
I'm the one to blame?

I'd rather think not,
As I know the truth.
I knew I was wrong,
For ever loving you.
Just a little poem for you guys! :dummy:

I guess it's just to prove that I'm still active on here, even though I've not been posting a lot lately. ^^;

I've been working on an animation... just in case you're wondering what I have been doing. xD

I've got 190 frames so far, and just slightly over 20 seconds. xD

I've been listening to this one song so much lately, that it's probably the reason for this poem to have became, well... a poem! xD

The song: [link]

It's super awesome guys. Even if you don't like Homestuck, it's just... epic! ;w;

So, yeah. c:

Sorry about the fact that my poetry always seems to be somewhat sad... I can't help it. ^^;

That's just how I like to write poetry and stuff. ^^;

I'm not sure why, but it seems to flow out a lot better, rather than when I try to make it seem slightly happier. ^^;

Well, I hope you like this anyway! ^w^

Please do enjoy! ^^
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CanineTherapy Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
It's wonderful, c: Though I'm afraid that I couldn't read more than half .n. Too painful.
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:iconwolfcubzelda:
Wolfcubzelda Featured By Owner May 23, 2012   General Artist
Thank you so much. ;;w;;
And aww... sorry. oAo I didn't mean it to hurt anyone... ;A;
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rubanote Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
that happens more often than people think
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JellyBeanRainbow Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
I can realate to what you're saying, you never realise that someone lying to you until they leave you for good. :hug: I can sympathise with the fact that sad poetry flows better, it's the same for me.
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Wolfcubzelda Featured By Owner May 23, 2012   General Artist
I'm glad you can relate to that! ^^ The exact point I was trying to pull across. :D Even though I've never had to deal with this sort of thing exactly as a loving relationship sort of thing, I've had it with friends, and from hearing it from other people's experiences, so I'm always hoping that I can get the right feelings through on things. ( I really hope I'm doing it right. :XD: )
It's quite funny how the more emotional something is, the easier it seems to be to wright about.

I just had a scan through some of your work, and it's beautiful and full of emotion! I wish to one day be able to wright as well as you can. ^^
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JellyBeanRainbow Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
I've only had it with friends too but when you've been friends with them for ten years, it does feel similar when they betray you. You got the feelings exactly right there :)

I'm glad you like my work :) :hug:
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